Surabaya is the place when I was born. I have grown up in Surabaya until now. I have many relatives who live in Surabaya. My grandfather and grandmother lived in Surabaya too. In Surabaya has many tourist places, malls, hotels, and buildings other high. One example where the most famous attractions in Surabaya is "the Hero's Monument". Monument is a historical monument. The Monument was built so that Surabaya's children know what had done by the heroes of the past and They will remember services of the heroes. Hero's Monument also save a lot of unique objects and historical objects.
Surabaya is a clean and green city, Surabaya also had received ADIPURA awards from the government. In Surabaya also had received the award in the field of sports, for example: PERSEBAYA ever win the football three times, and also win the match in volleyball in Indonesian. So I proud of living in Surabaya, for me, the city of Surabaya is the most beautiful and does not have both of them.
your tense good enough...
BalasHapusbut,..I think you can make the best again,.
you can improve your tense, spelling etc...
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BalasHapusAfter I read your hometown describe, allow me to give comments.
BalasHapusOkay, your describe is good but there are a little mistakes, such as :
In the first paragraph, you haven't to write about your selves ( in the first sentence until the fourth sentence).
In the second paragraph, " So Iproud of living in Surabaya",= So I'm proud of living in Surabaya. ( after I give to be cause proud is adjective).
I apologize to you if my comments isn't perfect and you can disagree with me.
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BalasHapusI agree with all my friend’s commented and I will change the description about my hometown. Thank you very much for all…………………